That's a fantastic lip colour for you. I think it looks good but you could go even more although it probably feels like you already have loads on - heavier smokier eyes and make the dots even darker and darker eyebrow to frame your eyes and balance out your lips. I think taking a pic of each make up you do is a great idea because sometimes you will get the brows best on one try and the dots best on another try and you can go over the pics and decide.
Not to hyjack your thread but I need to come up with Tribal make up, too and I haven't got a clue so if you find any good resources please share. My biggest dilema is that I'm not that confident with my applying technique (so pictures don't help me - I need tutorials) and I am older so negotiating wrinkles - boo hoo, I know that's life and I don't mind looking older but I'm serious when I say it's a challenge to put on makeup when your skin moves about - a younger canvas is much nicer to work with!
p.s. you are very pretty and the two side buns work well with your face shape.
I am not a tribal dancer, but somehow I don't think the dots on the cheeks look quite right and most of them have a heavier more smokey look around the eye. Google tribal bellydancers eye makeup pics in images, some great ideas show up and I believe there are some tutorials on youtube for eye makeup as well. I am sure you will find the right look
~Mosaic
Thank you. By not right do you mean not straight or one of those issues, or that they don't look to be a part of the ensemble?